sams1ra

Hiya, I'm really enjoying this series. You've created a very interesting story and it had me going to the next chapter instead of going to bed, so kudos for being so engaging! Would you like one small piece of creative critism? The polls at the end of each chapter actually diminish the effect of the chapter. Your story is crafted very well, but the polls come across as something a first time author would employ, and your story certainly doesn't come across as the work of a first time author. Anyway, just my opinion, feel free to ignore it. Once again, I'm loving your series and can't wait for more! *g*