Fantastic writing, you're very good at drawing the reader in.
I'm glad John's there now. I liked his method of finding out where his son was, although I felt a bit bad for the nurse. Still more questions than answers but that's good, makes me want to read chapter three!
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Date: 2008-08-15 11:56 am (UTC)I'm glad John's there now. I liked his method of finding out where his son was, although I felt a bit bad for the nurse. Still more questions than answers but that's good, makes me want to read chapter three!