ext_19194 ([identity profile] nativestar.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sams1ra 2008-08-15 11:56 am (UTC)

Fantastic writing, you're very good at drawing the reader in.

I'm glad John's there now. I liked his method of finding out where his son was, although I felt a bit bad for the nurse. Still more questions than answers but that's good, makes me want to read chapter three!

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