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Looks like 4.19 is going to stay with me for a while. And this season as a whole.
I keep waiting for Dean to snap. I think, if I was reading it as a fic, I'd already would have told the writer I think it was too much for a person to handle, and the way Dean just doesn't break doesn't feel realistic to me. But it's not a fic. And that's why this is.

Title: The Last Moments
Disclaimer: Supernatural and it's characters are not mine.
Characters: Dean, Castiel - no pairings. GEN
Rating: G
Warnings: Future!fic. Dark.
Wordcount: 154
Spoilers: For 4.01



 "So this is it, huh? Do or die," Dean said, looking at the horizon.

"Indeed," Castiel said, "We must not fail this time."

"You actually think we can stop them from breaking the seal?" Dean asked, glancing at the angel from the corner of his eye.

"I have faith in the Lord," Castiel replied solemnly.

"Yeah," Dean said, "I bet they said the same thing when the Flood started. Oh, don’t worry, it's just a little rain."

"Have faith, Dean," Castiel said softly.

"In God?"

"Yes," Castiel said, "And in yourself," he added. Dean gave a small nod, eyes roaming the horizon.

"You think we're going to survive this? That I'm going to survive this?" Dean asked.

"I don’t know," Castiel said.

"Well, in that case, can you do me a favor?" Dean asked, turning to look at the angel. Castiel turned his head to face him. "Can you make sure that I don’t?"

(end)

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Date: 2009-04-25 07:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teachertam.livejournal.com
I need an emoticon for jaw dropping. (I need to know how to use an emoticon, if I ever had one.)

This story just...that last request from Dean? *sniffs*

Yikes.

This really punched me in the gut. Way to go! :)

And I SO agree with you about Dean's pain being too much to bear! Even without the full memory of 40 years in Hell (I still can't bring myself to believe that he really remembers all of it...) he's got WAY too much pain going on to not break at some point.

Very nice fic. Thanks!

(Edited because I used the wrong picture...)

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Date: 2009-04-25 08:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sams1ra.livejournal.com
Image

To insert a picture: < img src = "your pic address here" / > (without the spaces)

It is just a punch to the gut, isn't it? *sniffles*

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Date: 2009-04-25 08:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tru-faith-lost.livejournal.com
Aww, I can see him saying that. So sad.

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Date: 2009-04-25 04:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sams1ra.livejournal.com
*weeps*
*notices your icon*
*drowns in tears and drool*

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Date: 2009-04-25 04:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tru-faith-lost.livejournal.com
lOL, it's my new firefox add-on that randomly selects a userpic. I don't remember which it is. LOL.

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Date: 2009-04-25 07:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] apieceofcake.livejournal.com
Oh noes :-(

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Date: 2009-04-26 10:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sams1ra.livejournal.com
*sniffles* T__T

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Date: 2009-04-25 08:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkphoenix1985.livejournal.com
this is incredible! especially if Sam is assumingly dead or really dark!side!

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Date: 2009-04-26 10:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sams1ra.livejournal.com
I'm actually not assuming anything. Just... so much weight on his shoulders, and it's just so... *weeps*

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Date: 2009-04-26 02:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pinkphoenix1985.livejournal.com
totally *hands tissues*

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Date: 2009-04-28 04:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] isha-chan.livejournal.com
*heavy sigh*
It's so short but so very intense! I can really imagine Dean's last line to be said by him like this. And you're right. I wonder when he's gonna snap. Any person would. He's just too stubborn (and still protecting Sam) to admit he reached the end of his sanity... but that's just my opinion.
I hope, Sam will be able to help him when it comes to this. (Yes, I still have faith in Sam^^)

Great story. Thanks for posting^^

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Date: 2009-04-28 07:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sams1ra.livejournal.com
I hope so, too!
And thank YOU for commenting.

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Date: 2009-04-28 04:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lynzibell.livejournal.com
Oh Dean!!!!!!! So sad and lovely! thanks for sharing!!

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Date: 2009-04-28 07:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sams1ra.livejournal.com
No, Thank you!

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Date: 2009-04-28 07:07 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] smilla02.livejournal.com
Oh, Dean. Oh. Ouch! The last line packs a punch. I can imagine the small smirk that goes with it, and the dead serious look in his eyes.

p.s.

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Date: 2009-04-28 07:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sams1ra.livejournal.com
Yeah, I know *blushes* but every time I try to fix it, the lj-cut keeps getting screwed up, and the font size gets tiny and the only other idea I had was reposting - but I don't want to lose the comments, you know?

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Date: 2009-04-28 07:15 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] smilla02.livejournal.com
Oh, that's seriously weird. It would freak me out as I tend to find typos after posting a fic and run to correct them. Ignore it, then, and me.
:)

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Date: 2009-04-28 07:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sams1ra.livejournal.com
I'll ignore the typo, but not you! ^__^

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Date: 2009-04-28 08:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xphoenixrising.livejournal.com
Awww poor Dean. But I'm glad he trusts Castiel enough to admit it.

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Date: 2009-04-28 02:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sams1ra.livejournal.com
Thanks for reading. (love your icon, btw)

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Date: 2009-04-28 02:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xphoenixrising.livejournal.com
A lot of people seem to like it lol. I can't remember what episode it's from.

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Date: 2009-04-28 01:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] landrews.livejournal.com
Heartbreaking. I totally see that scene in my head. Thanks so much for putting it there :-)

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Date: 2009-04-28 02:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sams1ra.livejournal.com
Thank YOU for reading and commenting.

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